I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Hi my name is Makayla, I am from New Brighton Catholic School. I liked the way you told everyone about yourself and you described everything, I wish you could've used more description but otherwise I really enjoyed your blog post. Why did you only have 2 things about yourself? Where you only meant to do 2 ?
I loved the drawing you drew it was very amazing and outstanding, I wish you also could of finished you post, II still love the effort and work you put into it and hope you can do more posts that are amazing like this. From Makayla.
Hi, my name is Titan at Owairaka District School from Room 23. I really like your blog post about All about me. I remember I did something like this but I had to do it in video. Have you ever tried before?.
Thanks for sharing your learning. You should check out my blog!. (odstitan.blogspot.com) Blog you later, Titan
Hello My name is Fila and I'm from Room 23 at OWairaka District School. I really liked your blog post about your all about you. I remember when I did something like this have you tried putting slides into your all about you. have you ever tried it before? Thank you for sharing your learning you should check out my blog http://odssionelo.blogspot.com/
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something I have done well. Thoughtful - a sentence or more that lets me know you that you read/watched or listened to what I had to say.
Kia ora Tai! I was not surprised to see your favourite subject at school was drawing. You are very talented in this area. - Whāea Nicky
ReplyDeleteHello Tai .
ReplyDeleteI like how you like drawing.
I like drawing too.
Tai I think you should show your favorite toys. Form James
Hi my name is Makayla, I am from New Brighton Catholic School. I liked the way you told everyone about yourself and you described everything, I wish you could've used more description but otherwise I really enjoyed your blog post. Why did you only have 2 things about yourself? Where you only meant to do 2 ?
ReplyDeleteI loved the drawing you drew it was very amazing and outstanding, I wish you also could of finished you post, II still love the effort and work you put into it and hope you can do more posts that are amazing like this.
From Makayla.
Hi, my name is Titan at Owairaka District School from Room 23. I really like your blog post about All about me. I remember I did something like this but I had to do it in video. Have you ever tried before?.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your learning.
You should check out my blog!.
(odstitan.blogspot.com)
Blog you later,
Titan
Hello My name is Fila and I'm from Room 23 at OWairaka District School. I really liked your blog post about your all about you. I remember when I did something like this have you tried putting slides into your all about you. have you ever tried it before? Thank you for sharing your learning you should check out my blog http://odssionelo.blogspot.com/
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